Beauty of Nature(Haiku)

by Rahl The Layman Lord   Mar 13, 2007


Sun Sweeping the hills
Luminating yon expanse
Wilderness, Freedom

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  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    'yon' < loved it.
    Wow.
    Haven't seen a haiku with like, any older english words.
    Amazingly beautiful poem.
    Loved how it was like tiny [usually i hate these] but you did a great job with it. Oh, finish my sentence. Loved how it was tiny, yet captivating in a way. :]

  • 16 years ago

    by x Mo x

    That was a beautiful haiku, I havent read one in a long time. I like the description of nature, its so short and so filled at the same time. Great job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Nyx

    Hey sisttta ..nice all u need is a picture

  • 17 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    ...lovely...

  • 17 years ago

    by silvershoes

    That is actually quite beautiful Jason. Though you encapture nature, this is not a typical haiku. You incorporate Old English! You would do that, wouldn't you?

    5.5