That was very good your a good writer keep it up 5/5

The starting two lines were magic. the ending words you used were great! i have never heard of the word adapt b4 in a poem.

5/5 David

I love this poem it is very deep i don't understand why not many people are commenting this one 10/5

Great poem with awsome wordings n descriptions of feelings. great work. I didnt rate this one u knw the reason i deem!