I enjoyed this one, but it kinda seemed like something was missing not even sure what. The flow wasn't too bad, and the message was pretty good, I don't know. I thought it was pretty good though. Keep up the good work. 4/5
-Ally

Oh. I like the concept and the piece itself as well. Considering its technical areas, there are a few grammatical errors that should be fixed without further ado.

For instance:
"For the good or the bad." ~ "Whether for good or bad"
"Life is gave, and life is lost." ~ "Live is given; Life is lost." (vanished or gone will do.)

By doing so, in my humblest opinion, you could augment this piece to a higher degree through the use of a consitent line meter or uniform syllable count. Other than that, I was quite pleased to have read such a delightful poem! Indeed, I believe Life is a constant change. =] Thank you for sharing as well as commenting on my poem. Regards, Debbie