Comments : To know all there is to know

  • 11 years ago

    by Nikki

    I really liked that, i think at time we all feel like that..=))

  • 11 years ago

    by Roses and lilys

    Wonderful poem. I really liked it:) What girl dosn't want some of those things:) 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Debbie

    Butterfly's = butterflies

    This piece is quite beautiful. On the whole, it seems like a prose poem. The fact that you've written a rather mesmerizing prose is terrific. I like that. Keep it up!

    Debbie

  • 11 years ago

    by Sole

    Wow. I really enjoyed reading through this poem. It was well written and the content was beautiful. I loved every second of it.

    Take Care - Sole.

  • 11 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Again a wonderful written poem, but the structure is off, break it into stanzas, it will flow much better and the strucutre will be better as well. Over all I loved your wording.

    Peace, Joe

  • 8 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    Beautiful write 5/5