Awww thats excellent. you seem so desperate to have another chance. hey good poem, you have a good talent here so keep writing. take kare xxxxx

Hey Austin
the beginning was a little rough I mean I didn't think it would be all that great then you hit this stanza and it changed for the better

I want to say I love you!
But will it be in vain.
Will you just reject me
because of all the pain?

I loved that part...The beginning the reason I wasn't fond of it was because I thought the words seemed forced out so you could rhyme nice poem though
xoxo kaila

This is more disappointing then your first.
3.5
It lacked the flow and orioginialty your first one possessed.

I hope you're others are better

^wings of flames doesn't know what they're talking about...

i love this poem, it's amazing! you're so talented... there's so much emotion in this, great job! 5/5

Hm. I like the choice of words, for the most part, but...I don't know about the stanza:
"Just wanted to make you happy
but I did the opposite of that.
Made you sad and angry
and it was over just like that."
I'm not exactly sure why I dislike it. I think it has a flow problem. Maybe take it and read it outloud to yourself, try to rework it a little bit?
All it all, good job :]