I liked how you portrayed this poem really good write. Well done ~mel

Well done!!!! i love it 5/5 =] its so good im going to read ur other poems

Good job. good description and topic. keep it up.

I liked it!! Not many people know how to write about this and I think you did a fabulous job! nicely done!
xoxo
kaila

I liked it. Great flow, diffrent, well pinned. all in all an awesome write and an even better read.5/5