wow that was a very amazing poem! great job! keep up the good work!!

thanks guys! just a note: it means that i sometimes experience hardships in life, like every1 else and it shows. like a mask, this is what people see at first and its the people's decision on how to look at me through these problems.

This is one of the most amazing poems i have ever read well Done !!!!! top marks keep writtin u have talent girl !!!

WOW! that poem was deep girl, Im lovin it. That is one of my favorites!

This morbid mask portrays my face;
Displaying my life in many ways.
The choice is yours to pick which view
To look at me and see me through.

dramatic ending... WHOA!

Great poem, well written. 5/5