Comments : The spinning and the spun

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara

    Deep and amazing,...i loved the last few lines
    "Whille I am spinning
    she gets spun.
    She's got no world
    without her fun".

    it really hit me

  • 11 years ago

    by AlaSkA

    Pretty good. i like poems that arent all stanza's and ababababba.. nice flow, maybe overdoing it with the word fun. but it gets the point across.

    good write 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Kristina

    Wow this is was really good. what a great write! 5/5


  • 11 years ago

    by Teria

    Hmm. Interesting. I liked it, unique.

  • 11 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    Lol crazyness thats really cool, its different too :) good write

  • 11 years ago

    by Nikki

    Thats really good, i liked it!!

  • 11 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Hey!!........great wrk!...beautiful poem!!!....loved this it up!....


  • 11 years ago

    by x Mo x

    That was deep. I like the flow and words! It made it all so wonderful. Great Job!

  • 11 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    I like the last lines they were great! it had a good flow you made it an amazing poem!