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Deep and amazing,...i loved the last few lines
"Whille I am spinning
she gets spun.
She's got no world
without her fun".
it really hit me
Pretty good. i like poems that arent all stanza's and ababababba.. nice flow, maybe overdoing it with the word fun. but it gets the point across.
good write 5/5
Wow this is was really good. what a great write! 5/5
Hmm. Interesting. I liked it, unique.
Lol crazyness thats really cool, its different too :) good write
Thats really good, i liked it!!
by xxSnow Angelxx
Hey!!........great wrk!...beautiful poem!!!....loved this 1..kp it up!....
by x Mo x
That was deep. I like the flow and words! It made it all so wonderful. Great Job!
by Rose not your average
I like the last lines they were great! it had a good flow you made it an amazing poem!