Deep and amazing,...i loved the last few lines
"Whille I am spinning
she gets spun.
She's got no world
without her fun".

it really hit me

Pretty good. i like poems that arent all stanza's and ababababba.. nice flow, maybe overdoing it with the word fun. but it gets the point across.

good write 5/5
Tom

Wow this is was really good. what a great write! 5/5

~Kristina

Hmm. Interesting. I liked it, unique.

Lol crazyness thats really cool, its different too :) good write

Thats really good, i liked it!!

Hey!!........great wrk!...beautiful poem!!!....loved this 1..kp it up!....
5/5

xxPoojaxx

That was deep. I like the flow and words! It made it all so wonderful. Great Job!

I like the last lines they were great! it had a good flow you made it an amazing poem!