Oh, you shouldn't stop writing! This is really good. It flows so naturally and I like your word choice. Don't ever give up, cuz you've got talent. 5/5

Noooo!
please don't stop writing Ashlie, you are such a good writer, and its so beautiful, it flows so good,
5/5
gabriella

Noo!! Don't stop writing poetry I barley know you...wait I don't even know you but still Your poems are so talented and I can see your put your heart into them!!

Catching poem with awsome rhyming stanzas. I really liked this piece and have you just 5/5.
plx smile 4 me by checkin out my fart is an art.
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