Comments : Words Couldnt Help

  • 11 years ago

    by Domino0792

    This poem was inspired by a close mate who loved someone very prceious to her. The two of them dated and unfortunately they parted from troubles within the relationship. She still loved him deeply however he moved on and started going after her best mate TeRina. She was crushed and thought the only way to escape was to return to cutting. She wrote a to a mate of hers who lived a fair way away from her. Channon did not die, instead Sarah was able to convince her to stop. Channon allowed me to write this and she approved it before i posted this.

  • 11 years ago

    by amanda flood

    I have never seen a poem wrote this way before
    and it is excellent great great great i love it
    excellent work well done i hope to see more like that i loved it :}

    thank u for commenting on my poem:~}

  • 11 years ago

    by chavii

    Nicely written, very creative style.

  • 11 years ago

    by David

    Now this is cool. so sweet that your friend was being so considerate and helpful. well thats wat friends are for.

    5/5 David

  • 11 years ago

    by Lacey

    I love it i can relate in a way. Keep writting from your heart it was beautiful.<3 <3

  • 11 years ago

    by June

    Very well written ,well done!!keep on writing ,look forward to reading more from you.

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    Interesting, never seen a poem written like this before. pretty cool stuff. Lovely.

  • 11 years ago

    by BlAcK TaNgLeD HeArT

    =(

    beautifully written but so sad at the same time. its okay.....im here....you know that.

    -xox-

  • 11 years ago

    by UNDERESTIMATED

    Hey babes whats the go... was that bout me an adam..? you know im ashamed of the whole situation... i love them all... i lvoe you i love beth... i love adam... you are all amazing... i hate thinking you thought that... like i said some mistakes just cant be forgotten... and he didnt go for me babe... he never wanted me expect that once... i love you always chan... "Pain is a cover for our self loss, the pain i feel is because of your selfcentred acts"...
    x-x-x-x

  • 11 years ago

    by kasey20

    One word.. WOW!
    this is sad.. but understandable..
    many people are like this but dont relize how important they really are!

  • 11 years ago

    by TyrantxTia

    This is realy good. this is like wuts going on between me and my friend, but im the girl who wants to die