Comments : Bath

  • 10 years ago

    by Eclipse

    Hiya.
    I'm a great fan of your work, and secretly one of your many stalkers...

    Anyway,
    this poem depicts what a bath is. An escape from the world that is.
    I think you could have done better with the layout of this poem though, but thats MY opinion, and you better not kill me for it.
    I still think it was a good poem nonetheless, and one which I could relate to...thus comment on.

    Keep on trucking,
    Eclipse.
    x x x x x (and an) O

  • 9 years ago

    by Drew Gold

    Wow this is amazing,.. very solid and intwined with itself.
    reminds me about the truth of ourselves. of what a bath can really be! (spanish bath?) :p