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by Infected with His Deadly Love
This is an interesting poem. The flow was excellent as well as the structure. Great imagery.
Good Job 5/5
I guess they no longer stock
My old body parts
No longer covered by warranty
At least not at my local Wal-Mart
This is real cute Sherry.....clever....55/ Debbie
Does it go in this catagory? i don't know. its up to you. i loved the way it was all set out tho. again another excellent poem.
Oh my gosh awsome poem
by xPerfect Chaosx
Lmao!! I love that poem!! Great Job!! The flow is wonderful and it's quite humorous!! I almost fell out of my chair I laughed so hard!! 5/5!!!
by PnQ Mod Account
Oh Sherry! This is so precious! If only we COULD get replacement parts!
by Rachel RTVW
This was cute, funny and very unique!
by Ed or Ian Henderson
Marvelous stuff! A thoroughly enjoyable read. And so nice to see a funny poem posted in the funnies, rather than the virals that the kids like to post as their own. Thank you thank you thank you!
Very funny, imaginative and a great flow. 5.5/5
Loved the poem, it was delightfully hysterical.
by Italian Stallion
Very interesting outlook on life I guess one\' can say and very funny at the sametime. The flow was good and structure as well. I really liked the way this poem was worded. Great Job.
by Jenni Marie
Oh, this made me giggle.
I thought it flowed well throughout, the imagery was wonderfully done and the first stanza was such a great opener and from there on it just kept getting better and better.
You did a great job with this!
by Hey Brittknee
Wow excellent job, this mad me laugh the whole time, and definetly made my day happy =]
& still laughing
Very good poem, vey creative and interesting, you just went a little off with the flow sometimes, but it was very good keep it up.
by Victoria Rainey
Lol that was really good and very descriptive good job and keep up the work!! 5/5
"I could not believe my ears
When she told me to leave
She asked if I was crazy
I politely told her no
My name is Sherry"
lol : D
kind of a cute poem..... hee hee
by Anthony smith
This is a fun poem and I enjoyed reading it.
Wow. i don't know what a walmart is. but i thought this poem was funny. the way you turned it into going to find body parts that fit was just such a great idea. i loved it. great work 5/5
by Dark Secrets
Hahaha... I just laughed picturing it all
Great idea for a very funny poem!