Comments : Registered at Wal-Mart

  • This is an interesting poem. The flow was excellent as well as the structure. Great imagery.

    Good Job 5/5

    :Sarah:

  • 10 years ago

    by debbylyn

    I guess they no longer stock
    My old body parts
    No longer covered by warranty
    At least not at my local Wal-Mart

    This is real cute Sherry.....clever....55/ Debbie

  • 10 years ago

    by David

    Does it go in this catagory? i don't know. its up to you. i loved the way it was all set out tho. again another excellent poem.

    5/5 David

  • 10 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Oh my gosh awsome poem

  • 10 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    Lmao!! I love that poem!! Great Job!! The flow is wonderful and it's quite humorous!! I almost fell out of my chair I laughed so hard!! 5/5!!!
    Much Love,
    .:Danielle:.

  • 10 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    Oh Sherry! This is so precious! If only we COULD get replacement parts!

  • 10 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    This was cute, funny and very unique!

  • 10 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    Marvelous stuff! A thoroughly enjoyable read. And so nice to see a funny poem posted in the funnies, rather than the virals that the kids like to post as their own. Thank you thank you thank you!

  • 10 years ago

    by Emma

    Very funny, imaginative and a great flow. 5.5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Autumn

    Loved the poem, it was delightfully hysterical.

  • 10 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Very interesting outlook on life I guess one\' can say and very funny at the sametime. The flow was good and structure as well. I really liked the way this poem was worded. Great Job.

    Peace, Joe

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    AHAHAHAHAHA
    Oh, this made me giggle.
    I thought it flowed well throughout, the imagery was wonderfully done and the first stanza was such a great opener and from there on it just kept getting better and better.
    You did a great job with this!

  • 10 years ago

    by Hey Brittknee

    Wow excellent job, this mad me laugh the whole time, and definetly made my day happy =]

    amazing

    & still laughing
    brittany (MD)

  • 10 years ago

    by Wallace

    Very good poem, vey creative and interesting, you just went a little off with the flow sometimes, but it was very good keep it up.

  • 10 years ago

    by Victoria Rainey

    Lol that was really good and very descriptive good job and keep up the work!! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by sibyllene

    "I could not believe my ears
    When she told me to leave
    She asked if I was crazy
    I politely told her no
    My name is Sherry"

    lol : D

    kind of a cute poem..... hee hee

  • 10 years ago

    by Anthony smith

    This is a fun poem and I enjoyed reading it.

  • 10 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow. i don't know what a walmart is. but i thought this poem was funny. the way you turned it into going to find body parts that fit was just such a great idea. i loved it. great work 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Hahaha... I just laughed picturing it all

  • 7 years ago

    by Fran

    Great idea for a very funny poem!