Comments : Love Found A Way

  • 11 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Awh. This is really good, you did a great job with writing it. I love how easily it flows and everything. I can relate really well to it, with the boy I am dating at this current time. Very nicely done.

  • 11 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    "I use to think that love could never come my way.
    Love use to feel like a burden weighing me down.
    Everyone seemed so unhappy with what love does.
    And I never wanted that feeling to come around."
    "You kept me safe when I was daunted from this life."

    This relates to my life alot. Great poem--it was descriptive yet understandable as well.

  • 11 years ago

    by CarissalRADIOFACEl

    The poem has a really strong meaning, and you portrayed feelings many can't seem to get out, much less down on matter. I rated a four because the flow felt a little shaky. Truly awesome piece if work~

  • 11 years ago

    by Kurt

    Ok, well the poem wasn't bad. However, I suggest that you fix the syllable count. Just because lines end rhyming doesn't mean the flow will be perfect. Also a suggestion, each line seemed to sprout out of no where. Try to keep the lines focused like you would a stanza. This will help keep the writing from becoming confusing. All things considered the poem is well on its way to becoming great. And the errors were minimal and harmless. I rate it 4/5.

  • 11 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Teenage love is something so rare, and very hard to find. As you both grow together so will your love, and each day will be a wish come true. great write 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, u r awsome with your poems, this one i can relate to it alot, i use to not believe in love, i use to always make fun of lovers too,lol. until one day her hazel eyes made me fall and since then i never could get up...
    you are so talented....... keep it up