Wow....u must have put so much work into this
one thing...nothing really...just a spelling mistake
The train us to kill...
(they train us to kill...)
=)
a 5/5 from me

It's so cool that you have your emotions out and the truths you reflect..so honestly
But there is just a suggestion
It would be perfect if you make your lines shorter

God bless and save you from all the bad bro!
Your lil sister
LauRa

Well done babe i think laura has it. Shorter lines would make it easier on the eyes and easier to read. Nessa