Comments : Black [Acrostic]

  • 11 years ago

    by ~*SugarCube*~

    "C rimson showers painfully released from eyes"
    I like that line alot. This was a great poem. You did a really good job on it. keep up the good work! well done. 5/5

    ~Chelsea

  • 11 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    This is such a nice poem as acrostic poems are my favorite style.........
    i like your vocab choices, they are all great word uses.
    keep it up

  • 11 years ago

    by Chrissie

    This was so discriptive!! Scary to me :s but thats just me lol. I still liked it because of the decription..Well done. Im gonna give you a five. Hehe. Xx Chrissie

  • 11 years ago

    by Victoria Rainey

    Jessy.. even though you do get into my business or what so ever lol you are a talented writer and I hope yo never forget that.. I love the choices of words.. so dark, and deep and yet it touches me .. good job keep up the good work!

  • 11 years ago

    by Tammie

    This is a really interesting poem Jessy. Really dark and intriguing. The word choice in this really made the poem what it is. Very detailed in description. Excellent. =] 5/5

    Tammie xo

  • 11 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    I liked this poem, and the way you described the color so beautifully. While the flow was just a bit off at some rare points, it was a wonderful poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by Darien

    Beautiful job hun!.. I really miss reading your poetry!! *Hugs* to my cyber wife for being so talented!..

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara

    Wow great job! this makes me want to do an acrostic poem. nice word choice!
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Debbie

    I was rather astounded by this brilliant, dark piece of Acrostic poetry. When you said, "B urning savagely into pale, soft flesh", it instantly grabbed my attention to it. 'Twas a wonderful poem. A real pleasure to read. =] Thank you for sharing!
    Marian

  • 11 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    I love acrostics. This was really good, nice choice of words.

  • 11 years ago

    by Rusheena

    I love the acrostic; it was very creative. But I hope you didn't need to add the meaning of an acrostic b/c some people didn't understand(especially if they are writers). That's embarassin'(kidding!)

  • 11 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Cool write i really enjoyed that piece. 5/5 from me

  • 11 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    Very nicely written...I love acrostic poems, exspecially this one!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Acrostics can be difficult to write due to the restricting format, but it shows your creativity for attempting one. I think it is better to not rhyme with this form, it seems to flow better and lets face it its hard enough without adding the further restriction of rhyme, so well done for that.
    Hmm the subject again wasn't really my thing. But I like how you used the form, so I'll say no more.

  • 11 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Dark, mysterious, heartwrenching -- great ingredients for a flawless poem. I love this, a very well written acrostic. ;]

    5.5
    :]