Jessy.. even though you do get into my business or what so ever lol you are a talented writer and I hope yo never forget that.. I love the choices of words.. so dark, and deep and yet it touches me .. good job keep up the good work!
I was rather astounded by this brilliant, dark piece of Acrostic poetry. When you said, "B urning savagely into pale, soft flesh", it instantly grabbed my attention to it. 'Twas a wonderful poem. A real pleasure to read. =] Thank you for sharing!
Acrostics can be difficult to write due to the restricting format, but it shows your creativity for attempting one. I think it is better to not rhyme with this form, it seems to flow better and lets face it its hard enough without adding the further restriction of rhyme, so well done for that.
Hmm the subject again wasn't really my thing. But I like how you used the form, so I'll say no more.