Comments : Suicide Notes and Bloody Kisses

  • 10 years ago

    by Jennifer

    Wow! very sad! Good, but sad! I like your writing. Keep it up! Also is Imagen suppose to be Imagine!?

  • 10 years ago

    by MeganLeigh

    Wow, I'm at a loss of words. That is the best poem I have EVER read. I loved it. It brought tears to my eyes. I could feel the pain dripping from the poem. Keep writing!!

    ~Megan~

  • 10 years ago

    by xDryTearsx

    Detailed, didnt leave anything out to leave the reader confused. I loved how feelings from the paper jumped right to the reader while reading this. I definetly felt her pain. great jog <3

  • 10 years ago

    by Nicole Kolman

    I LOVE this poem!!! i can really relate cuz i feel the same way your really good at writing and from what i can tell from reading your poems your improving with every one!! keep writing much love~! <3 nicole

    p.s.. check out my poems if u get the chance thanx

  • 10 years ago

    by Curry

    Good poem. i gave it a 4/5 because i personally like poems that rhyme better. but it was still a great poem .keep up the good work!

  • 10 years ago

    by Stephanie Scherder

    I LOVE THIS POEM!!! I CAN RELATE TO IT IN SO MANY WAYS...LATELY THATS HOW I FEEL...I HOPE TO READ MORE LIKE THIS!!

  • 10 years ago

    by malina

    I really liked this poem...maybe the best i've read so far

  • 10 years ago

    by carissalynn

    So sad. Written wonderfully.

  • 10 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Well, it wasn't what I had expected. It was better than what I expected. I did notice, each second line wasn't capitalized..which usually bugs me, but not all poets do it. And there were a few lines that were longer than the rest, when if you switched a few words around or took it down to the next line, it would look a lot neater as well.

    You did, however, do a great job in displaying the emotion of this poem without making it too typically a cutting poem. It had great imagery, and I really liked the line "when she saw a stray tear line from her daughters eye." That line truly took my breath away, it captivated me and I really liked it. It made the feel of the poem more intense knowing that the daughter had just died moments ago..with tears in her eyes and misery in her heart.

    Also, this poem sends a significant message. How even the happiest person that you know may be super depressed. Which, more people need to realize. Great job though, overall, I really enjoyed reading this. =)

    5.5

  • 10 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    This poem is excellent! i love it, theres so much emotion in it 5/5.. thank you for commentin muh poem 2..
    xx

  • 10 years ago

    by Sammie Jo

    Wow, this is really a sad depressing poem, but it's really good!!! ~Sam~

  • 10 years ago

    by David

    Ah yes this is a great poem. i agree that this is an excellent poem. i loved the description the most.

    5/5 David

  • Oh my god!
    This wasn't something I was expecting at all, I had just fell in love with your poem. I understand every single fiber of the poem.

    Good job!
    Please continue to write such beautiful works.

  • 10 years ago

    by Helen

    Im totally lost for words. its so sad it kind of gives me the shivers :S

    but a good poems all round

  • 10 years ago

    by Emily Reed

    Wow, that was a great poem! it connected with me more than anything in the world. great job!

  • 10 years ago

    by Ixora

    Wow and you said im good i love your writing. This poem embodied me is all i can really say and this line hit me hard for some reason:

    But worst of all on the floor,
    layed the girl who wasn't anything anymore.

    Eh anyway ill have to read some more of ur poems soon im in a bit of a rush but i wanted to comment back anyway and im really glad i took the time to read this.

    *^*crow*^*

  • 10 years ago

    by SuicideNotes2Poems

    I love this poem
    it was so sad but still good
    keep up the good work

  • 10 years ago

    by Dead Is The New Alive

    Wow this is a very good poem i cant wait to read the rest of yours
    _forever carly_

  • 10 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow that was a truly sad poem 5/5 very descriptive and unique

  • 10 years ago

    by Bexx

    Wow! So much pain.. good work