by PygmyPuff Apr 17, 2007
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
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Have you heard of King Athur's return? |
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Definitely like the subject matter of the poem. Feel as though you could have been more powerful and effective with this idea. |
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I feel a continuation of this poem and the last one you wrote. To me it is a variation on the last poem. (It's not too late, but it's not soon enough.) That was my favorite line of the poem. |