Comments : Ignorance of Society

  • 10 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    You really have a way with words . The first stanza and the last stanza were definitely my favourite`s . You did an ah`mazing job with this, and everything in this is so true . Nice title choice too ; it says all . I loved it (:
    ..__MiNDYY

  • 10 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wow this was very strong and had such a negative message.. Although I do agree with you on some parts. I also love the metaphores and word choices, perfect it made it very poetic and creative. wonderful work.

  • 10 years ago

    by ~*SugarCube*~

    "Weeping at night as the world never stops alternating.
    How could one loose a friend over a fight that hinders?
    An open wound can't heal if it annex over the time.
    Salt pours in as it tingles the pain that still is tender."

    Those lines are very good. You did an amazing job on this poem. The flow was Fantastic. And I loved your word choice. Wonderful job!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 5/5

    ~Chelsea

  • 10 years ago

    by stefanie

    Very nice. meaningful. i love it. great job. :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Like bugsi nthe air, wow what a similie, you use all kinds of language and experiment with it which is really good i dont seem any writers doing this.

    xxx alex xxx