You really have a way with words . The first stanza and the last stanza were definitely my favourite`s . You did an ah`mazing job with this, and everything in this is so true . Nice title choice too ; it says all . I loved it (:
Wow this was very strong and had such a negative message.. Although I do agree with you on some parts. I also love the metaphores and word choices, perfect it made it very poetic and creative. wonderful work.
"Weeping at night as the world never stops alternating.
How could one loose a friend over a fight that hinders?
An open wound can't heal if it annex over the time.
Salt pours in as it tingles the pain that still is tender."
Those lines are very good. You did an amazing job on this poem. The flow was Fantastic. And I loved your word choice. Wonderful job!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 5/5