Comments : What we were

  • 10 years ago

    by InterviewWithTheKat

    I love it, love it, love it!!!
    very well penned.
    keep it up!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by doug frazier

    Tara, I really liked your poem, I could tell this was for someone in your not so recent past. I hope that you have learned from your past heartaches and know more of what you want ffrom a boy. Nicely done. Hugs from Doug!

  • 10 years ago

    by doug frazier

    Great poem, from a scarred heart , hope things are better for you now. Lessons learned huh? Hugs from Doug!

  • 10 years ago

    by just me

    I love this.......... i dont get the nex to last stanza about before she becomes your boy....but other than thati love this especially the last stanza!!! absolutely love that!!!
    <3
    L.C

  • 10 years ago

    by Tara

    Lol opps so sorry, i'll fix that!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Michelle

    Awwww this peom was cute its kinda sad 2 but i loved it

  • 10 years ago

    by doug frazier

    Well written poem dear, but I detected just a bit of invy or jealousy at the loss of your ex. IVe been there myself, it can rip your heart out if it was only over for your ex and you were still in love. Hugs from Doug