Comments : Internet love, but it was so much more.

  • 10 years ago

    by NightSerenity

    It's sad..

  • 10 years ago

    by Tara

    Its sad but a good poem :)

  • 10 years ago

    by michael

    Very nice poem! I hate far distance love, your poem describes it. Well done

  • I can relate to this poem.. I think one more stanza would help it out. But it was good, the flow was pretty good. Nice work. =) You have potential.
    ~Ally~

  • 10 years ago

    by Roses and lilys

    I liked:) Another 5/5 keep up the grear work. Never stop writing.

  • 10 years ago

    by honeypot

    Hi Alex,

    I really liked this poem! "If only I had held you in my mind a little longer" line was divine.

    I think you really felt these words, and it shows in your imagery.

    Well done x

  • 10 years ago

    by Austin

    Sad..poem. but it was a wonderful read. You have much talent, please keep writing...but id love to see longer poems...please ;) id love to read them.

  • 10 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent poem, very sad but true again,and again we have so much in common, very well written, 5/5. I sure the same with someone I met, so deep in love ,but so many miles away,bless you,your friend Tracy,,,,,,,p.s keep up the good work

  • 10 years ago

    by Fsams

    Superb dear! Its perfect with an awsome flow n da best selection of words like choice n choose. wow 5/5 u sheer deserve

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This is so heartwrenching...I have tears in my eyes..
    Beautiful flowe throughout, well portrayed imagery and the emotion behind the words are clear for the reader to sense.