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Its sad but a good poem :)
Very nice poem! I hate far distance love, your poem describes it. Well done
by Hidden Feelings within these Words
I can relate to this poem.. I think one more stanza would help it out. But it was good, the flow was pretty good. Nice work. =) You have potential.
by Roses and lilys
I liked:) Another 5/5 keep up the grear work. Never stop writing.
I really liked this poem! "If only I had held you in my mind a little longer" line was divine.
I think you really felt these words, and it shows in your imagery.
Well done x
Sad..poem. but it was a wonderful read. You have much talent, please keep writing...but id love to see longer poems...please ;) id love to read them.
by Tracy D Rollings
Excellent poem, very sad but true again,and again we have so much in common, very well written, 5/5. I sure the same with someone I met, so deep in love ,but so many miles away,bless you,your friend Tracy,,,,,,,p.s keep up the good work
Superb dear! Its perfect with an awsome flow n da best selection of words like choice n choose. wow 5/5 u sheer deserve
by Jenni Marie
This is so heartwrenching...I have tears in my eyes..
Beautiful flowe throughout, well portrayed imagery and the emotion behind the words are clear for the reader to sense.