Debbie
This entire poem breathes beauty and love. A excellent job on your collab.

Lost, forgotten, without rhyme
Longing in my heart and mind
Awakened now, emotions saved
More than love, a promise made

Thes kinds of promises last through eternity.
Love your sis Cindy

You are so beautiful, beyond words, beyond form......
I am emptiness……as invisible words.
I look....lost in you
Whispered dreams, a breath between
More than love, our destiny
beautiful baby.......no vote can mark!!

"As deepest ocean's brilliant hue
Reflect to heaven dreams of you
Spiraling in winds of time
More than love, I know you're mine"

So so gorgeous, the whole poem just makes me want to smile and hug someone..
It's so beautiful..
5/5
*gem*

I loved every part of this poem, wonderfully written, descriptions felt like you could see it right infront of you, just loved it 5/5

Beautifully penned. Word choice and flow were great. Hope to see more collabs from two hearts in love. Excellent job. I am so very happy that you are so happy!

Well done to both of you. this was excellent. i know how you both wrote this. cause your style is usually different. but i liked this changed. your two styles melded well.

5/5 David

Wow Deb. to be honest I really could not move past the first stanza. For some reason I was captivated there and held in a dream.

I really enjoy it when an author is able to captivate me like that and hold me there in a minute trance. It is as though there is no other existance then the world that the author wrote about.

--Sher

As deepest ocean's brilliant hue
Reflect to heaven dreams of you
Spiraling in winds of time
More than love, I know you're mine

lovely poem, great words and the stanza above...outstanding...what a great collab...loved it

keep writing please

all the best and take care

Very nice poem!!

Celestial patterns, you in me
In emptiness I cease to be
Within our hearts a love divine
More than love, our souls align
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Beautiful, Beautiful stanza !
The ink of love flows through each line and leaves a breath taking mark upon the readers heart ....
Wonderful collab an excellent read

Luanne

Ah, wonderful and well written! I love this poem. The flow was flawless. I couldn't really find any mistakes or any grammar errors. Well done! Check out my two latest poems if you don't mind. God bless 5/5
<3Tay^__^ily

Wow is all i have to say. this poem leaves you speechless. i can completely relate to the emotion this poem expresses, thank you for putting it into words. 5/5.
xxoo darling
-jess

I like this poem it has a nice rhythem to it almost lyrical