Comments : The Well Beaten Track

  • 17 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Very good Gaillard. It was a powerful piece that provoked thoughts and feelings. There were many lines and rhymes that I liked, but I think these ones were my favorite;

    'Is there not a trailblazer to be found,
    To create a new path on solid ground?
    Forget all heroes and knights of old,
    Our Saviour's in us all to behold,'

    Well, I think we're done here. It's nice to see you writing again though. Good work...as usual, as i'm sure you don't need me to tell you.

    Brad