Comments : Burning Bridges

  • 10 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    Haha! Talk about a poem reminding you of fall out boy :]

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    ''Wouldn't piss on fire to put you out
    You've lost me now for good
    Take a long walk off short pier
    I'd push you if I could

    I need you in my life like a
    Hole going through my head
    Instead of burning bridges
    Why not drive off them instead''

    Ohhh those lines made me giggle. A lot. Hahaha
    I love this!
    I can feel the anger radiating from this, and yet it was still such a good read.
    Screw the fake friends!

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Gem
    Great job! Sure wouldn't want to make you my enemy.

    Wouldn't piss on fire to put you out
    You've lost me now for good
    Take a long walk off short pier
    I'd push you if I could

    You did a great job expressing your anger.
    Take care love Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by Lu

    Wouldn't piss on fire to put you out
    You've lost me now for good
    Take a long walk off short pier
    I'd push you if I could
    ^^^
    Gem I loved this stanza. Oh how I've dreamed of doing the last line to a few deserving
    people .... lol
    Tell it like it is girly ....
    Release that voice hunny and let those words flow ..... woot woot

    Awesome read Gem serious, yet made me giggle on the second stanza ...
    Well done Gem ... well done

  • 10 years ago

    by Chelsea

    Wow that was a great poem and you put your thoughts + feelings out there great. I hope this person feels the loss of an amazing person since she lost a great friend for a reason.
    5/5
    lots of love
    Chelsea

    ps. Yes I do know your story and its nice to have someone that can relate in that certain way. i am here for you whenever

  • 10 years ago

    by Debbie

    Good Heavens! Ma'dear, are you all right?

    "Wouldn't piss on fire to put you out
    You've lost me now for good
    Take a long walk off short pier
    I'd push you if I could"

    ^ Reading that stanza made me gulped. Heh. I could feel your fiery emotions blazing throughout. A wicked joy to read. Keep them coming! Love, Debbie

  • 10 years ago

    by Alex

    I like this one.

    "I need you in my life like a
    Hole going through my head
    Instead of burning bridges
    Why not drive off them instead''

    That's funny!

  • 10 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Sounds like you wrote this for me to my ex...lol .....love it!

    Wouldn't piss on fire to put you out
    You've lost me now for good
    Take a long walk off short pier
    I'd push you if I could

    ^ Great lines! Well done! 5/5 Debbie

  • 10 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Hahaha! I've never read anything like this before. And I loved it! Talk about "cutting the tension"...wow! That was really powerful, and in a some-what funny way, :)! Thanks for the good read!
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 10 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Ha, well this is different lol. I really liked this one. The emotion was fierce and made for a very powerful piece. Great read. 5/5

    marcella

  • 10 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Love this. Very relateable for a lot of readers I`m sure, and also a good way for you to vent. Great job, the imagery was amazing.

    5.5
    :]

  • 9 years ago

    by A girl broken until

    Nice!
    love it
    10/5