Comments : The She Wolf

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I frikken LOVE this!
    Wolves are my favourite animal, so I really, really enjoyed reading this =)
    The opening stanza was beautifully done, really pulled me into the poem, and from there on it just got better and better.
    The imagery used blew me away, it was so elegantly used, and created very vivid pictures.
    I love it!

  • 10 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    A very, very good piece. The structure and flow was flawless. The rhymes were perfect, and the words were wonderfully creative, which painted, not only a wonderful scene, but also a terrific story . All in all, a well written poem. I hope your others are just as good, or dare I say, perhaps even better. My favorite stanza has to be the closing one. In my novice opinion, I think that the first and last stanzas should always be the best.

    Brad

    P.S. I'm going to vote you for the weekly poetry contest. Good luck, and I hope you win

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Gem
    what a beautiful poem. The imagery was excellent.

    She stops outside a snowy den
    Hidden inside a peaceful glen
    Listening for the sounds of snores
    Her little cubs, she so adores

    This stanza touched me the image of the little cubs.
    Take care love Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by Marcus

    I love it honey!
    I know you have a thing about wolves and this is a perfect tribute!
    I love you
    xxx

  • 10 years ago

    by Molly

    Love this poem! 5/5 for me. Good rhyming. Keep up the good work!

  • 10 years ago

    by carissalynn

    Whoo, i would hate to be near that wolf, once again, you know what i am going to say [[=
    LOVE ITTT!!!! writee more!
    Carissa

  • 10 years ago

    by Wallace

    This is excellent, you really outdid yourself, this is another reminder why you are on my fav's list, excellent work, keep it up.

  • 10 years ago

    by steffff

    Whoah. i LOVE it. flows really well and the rhyming is so natural. keep up the good work!

  • 10 years ago

    by Debbie

    This is really delightful to read. An eerie sense of ambiguity stirrs throughout this piece in a way which made me long to learn more about it. As always, I'm enchanted. This piece is simply wonderful. Thanks for sharing hun! Love, Debbie

  • 10 years ago

    by MelindaJoy

    Very nice imagintaion I loved the rhyme sheme you did very good on this peice

  • 10 years ago

    by Robert

    This flowed very well and the Rhythm sheme was done quite well hats off, I been gone for a long while but maybe I should come back take care and hope to see you around plot121

  • 10 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    That was scary indeed, the way u started it...wow...did u watched any wolf movie to get this inspiration...??

    ultimate one

    all the best and take care

  • 10 years ago

    by Soft Parade

    Nicely written, everythi

  • 10 years ago

    by Roxy

    Oh, what an amazing poem...I love the description of how the wolf reacts!!
    Great poem
    xx Roxy

  • 10 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    Wow Gem. Very.... dark. lol. I really liked how you portrayed this poem. 5/5

  • I love love love this poem.
    I am adding it to my favs. x]
    The imagery was great and the flow was flawless.
    It was beautifully penned 5/5

    [Sarah]

  • 10 years ago

    by Kelly

    Gem

    Such a dark poem. The imagery is wonderful, a sense of urgency and danger. Amazing, I have missed reading your poems - not had a chance to be on here as much. Glad to see you havent lost your touch lol. Excellent poem.

    Kelly
    xx

  • 10 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    Excellent poem. Such perfect flow... Great job!!! 5/5

    Josie

  • 10 years ago

    by Jordan W

    Beautiful poem

    keep up the good work

    10/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Astaira Medley

    Hi I know you don't Know me but I would like to aske you if it would be okay to use your poem She Wolf in a card to my love. The reason I'm askeing is because my baby or feonce realy loved it ond he is curantly in another state.

    Sencierly,
    Racen