This made me smile at the end ashlie, you use your poems to say exactly what you want to say and say it perfectly. this is so sweet, 5/5 i hope your doing good.
luv gabriella

Great ending.....puts a smile on ones face. I like how you write, whatever happens you always right about it and it always has great flow and rhythmn and goes well together. Keep writing!! 5/5

Awwww Ashlie!! you really do have a way with words, how you can just write about the events that have happened and still make me smile in the end, even in a sad poem, your just sooo positive!!
I may not have clown love for you, but I do love you wiv all my heart hun!!

Love always
Lucy!

Excellent poem superbly done. It was a joy to read from start to finish, love it, keep it up.

Awwww!! Last stanza was amazing.
You have your way with words. Now I really have ran outta words to say about your poems. I'm stumbling =P
=] Great work. MCL xx