Comments : Small Smile(double Haiku)

  • 11 years ago

    by Startle Me

    You should've made this longer.
    I actually want to hear more of it.
    I love Takas and Haikus.
    They're very deep to me.
    I can actually see sweat in this.
    I can see you walking around sweating
    Looking around and seeing flowers.
    Wonderful imagery, dearest.
    Well done :]