I think this is my favourite one I've read of your's...the words flow beautifully, flow is perfect and flawless, and the whole poem is done so elegantly...beautiful work.

Another really good one with an excellent flow. Your writting shall take you far in life. :)

Alyson

Wow amazingflow and great love poem!!

Wow, that was amazing I really loved it. the word choice was perfect, and the flow was flawless. the emtion was strong. 5/5

Wow!!..tht'sthe only word i can tell.......it was amazing,perfect choice of words...the flow ws flawless...n just incredible!
Kp writing!
xxPoojaxx

I love it !