Comments : The meaning to love at first sight.

  • 11 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Very nice.....The first half of the poem started off very strong ....emotional....I like the image of the heart pulling you through a forest of dreams....the flow is a little off towards the end...but you have a nice style...enjoyable to read....5/5 Debbie

  • 11 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    At the being of this poem.. I was sort of pushing myself to read on; but I am glad I did. You did a wonderful job on putting out your emotions and touching the depths of love. An amazing write, good work.

  • 11 years ago

    by David

    This story poem had amazing levels of love and affection. well done and plz keep writing.

    5/5 David

  • 11 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    NIce poem 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Allison

    This was wonderful and it flowed nicely. ^.^ *5/5*


    P.S. Thanks for letting me know about the spelling seems I can't type in the morning lol

  • 11 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Hey...great poem...sipmle yet well exressed..u've put in emeotions well thru this oneu've penned love in a good style...
    Kp it up!


  • 11 years ago

    by Vanessa

    And wonderful story poem it was, well written, excellent word chice, deep strong emtions, that was amazing, the imagery, and everything just really held my complete attention. perfect job 5/5