Very nice.....The first half of the poem started off very strong ....emotional....I like the image of the heart pulling you through a forest of dreams....the flow is a little off towards the end...but you have a nice style...enjoyable to read....5/5 Debbie
At the being of this poem.. I was sort of pushing myself to read on; but I am glad I did. You did a wonderful job on putting out your emotions and touching the depths of love. An amazing write, good work.