Very nice.....The first half of the poem started off very strong ....emotional....I like the image of the heart pulling you through a forest of dreams....the flow is a little off towards the end...but you have a nice style...enjoyable to read....5/5 Debbie

At the being of this poem.. I was sort of pushing myself to read on; but I am glad I did. You did a wonderful job on putting out your emotions and touching the depths of love. An amazing write, good work.

This story poem had amazing levels of love and affection. well done and plz keep writing.

5/5 David

NIce poem 5/5

This was wonderful and it flowed nicely. ^.^ *5/5*

Alyson

P.S. Thanks for letting me know about the spelling mistake....it seems I can't type in the morning lol

Hey...great poem...sipmle yet well exressed..u've put in emeotions well thru this oneu've penned love in a good style...
Kp it up!

xxPoojaxx

And wonderful story poem it was, well written, excellent word chice, deep strong emtions, that was amazing, the imagery, and everything just really held my complete attention. perfect job 5/5