Darkened Depths of Shadow

by Twisted Heart   May 21, 2007


Darkened depths of shadow
It is you I fear
Upon the night a hunger
A chance to hide the tears

Inside the wounds of heartache
The haunting's cross the mind
Among the broken pieces
A teardrop's left behind

A shattering inside the soul
Shards find a haven there
Inside the depths of shadow
They're tended with such care.

But low the night has come upon
The depths of darkness plea
To tear the soul from but a breath
That's lost the will to flee.

Heed not the hunger of the heart
For night has come to see
Inside the thoughts that cloud the mind
Of broken memories.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Wallace

    Excellent poem, very well written. Keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

    Best Wishes
    Wallace

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Jeannie
    This is such a emotional piece. Your writing always draws me in. The imagery and flow excellent. Your talent is amazing.

    Heed not the hunger of the heart
    For night has come to see
    Inside the thoughts that cloud the mind
    Of broken memories.

    These lines really touched my heart.
    Take care
    Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Navy Blue Heart

    Wow, that was incredible! I loved the darkness of it and the language you used was so intense! Favourited! xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    An outstanding piece as always!
    As Luanne said, the flow was so effortless, almost fluid
    The words were so poignant and each line touched the soul.. it really got the mind thinking
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    Dang lady your poems seem to flow so
    effortlessly .... it makes me so darn envious .... lol ... seriously.

    - Choose a favorite stanza ... impossible. I love them all.
    Remarkable talent sweet lady and an amazing ability to move the reader to tears ....

    ((big hugs Auntie))
    Luanne

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