I hope you never stop writing becasue you are a great writer and I hope you never forget that....

I liekd this. It was kinda unique poem. You had a good strong rhyme scheme going on. And the poem had a good flow. Well the first stanza kinda makes the reader confused as to why this is in the sad poem section. You really make this princesss sound likeeverything a princess should be. Something we kinda imagine in fairy tales; "picture perfect" as you said. Then this stanza you kinda turn the subject around. You go on to say how shes kinda changed her route in life i guess. A very intresting and kinda unique poem. Enjoyable. Keep it up! xx

Once again you've written a poem on such a unique topic. The flow was good and the choice of words once again suited the poem perfectly. Excellent job 5/5

Excellent poem, i really liked this one, its was really good. well done
keep it up
xxxx

The flow of words was very good take care

Reading ur poems makes me inspired and made me search my mind into new areas i never thought possible to write bout. ur doing great, and keep it up.

Wow. A flawless poem, very strong and something I can very much so relate to myself, being gay. Oh, this poem is absolutely wonderful. It shall definitely earn a spot on my fav's.

That's all I have to say.
5/5
~Stephen White