In a world painted black

by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup   May 22, 2007


I walk down this street,
In a world painted black,
Walking at your pace,
You have a gun to my back!

Holding my arm tightly,
Afraid I will run.
You slow me down,
Again with that gun!

Pacing the streets,
In a world painted black,
You start to talk,
Hitting me, this is an attack!

All I hear is "to the ground",
I try to fight.
I try to mutter.
All I can to is fall with fright!

Will I see tomorrows sunlight?
In this world painted black?
He hits me hard,
The world goes white.

In this world painted white,
I hold no fear,
I know hes still there,
I can feel him so near.

I start to shake,
And I start to tremble,
As I began to wake,
Back in to this horrid place.

Held captive by you single gun.
Afraid to die or I would run!
Who know how long I was out?
Who know what he did with me?

In this world painted black,
Not a person to care,
With his gun in my back,
I start to swear.

My body is sore,
My hair is a mess,
I dont know why,
He picked me instead of the rest?

He tries to hold my close
To kiss away my fears
Only...
In this world painted black

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  • 16 years ago

    by audrey harris

    Wow, great poem, with the contrast of black and white and everything... awesome, written very well. :) 5/5, for sure!

  • 16 years ago

    by Benny Boi

    Alot of pain... Alot of emotion... A friggen good poem too. Best poetry comes from these things... although they should never happen! 10/10

  • 16 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    This is a cool poem. Lol that's how some ppl see the world. But once you find one person who cares it won't be too black lol. Great job. 5/5
    -vino

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    Wow that was a GREAT wirte i loved it seriouly u did a great job with it i loved how u repated the whole ina world painted black it flowed awsome to, nice write 5/5 always
    Kate~

  • 16 years ago

    by Twisted By You

    Thats a great poem, I can really relate to it!