Comments : In a world painted black

  • 11 years ago

    by RawrItsDollfacex

    I love this intire poem.
    i just dont like this line too much

    (All I hear is "to the ground",
    I try to fight.
    I try to mutter.
    All I can to is fall with fright!)

    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    That's really weird.....not knowing what the guy did to you?
    >_<!
    nice poem, annoys me when there is an 's' missing of stuff but it's really pretty good.

  • 11 years ago

    by White Chocolate Dynamite

    I like the poem, simple and easy. Leaves u in suspense. 5/5, check out some of my stuff! thxz

  • 11 years ago

    by jeffery sechrest

    Nice nesse wow is all i can say

  • 11 years ago

    by DAV1D AKA LILJOKER

    Yo that is tight,sometimes i do think bout dis world like dat,u good,l8er

  • 11 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    This is a good poem!...u say whats on ur mind!....keep it up!...feel free to read some of my poems! im not very good but comments r greatly appreaciated! cheers

  • 11 years ago

    by Twisted By You

    Thats a great poem, I can really relate to it!

  • 11 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    Wow that was a GREAT wirte i loved it seriouly u did a great job with it i loved how u repated the whole ina world painted black it flowed awsome to, nice write 5/5 always
    Kate~

  • 11 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    This is a cool poem. Lol that's how some ppl see the world. But once you find one person who cares it won't be too black lol. Great job. 5/5
    -vino

  • 11 years ago

    by Benny Boi

    Alot of pain... Alot of emotion... A friggen good poem too. Best poetry comes from these things... although they should never happen! 10/10

  • 10 years ago

    by audrey harris

    Wow, great poem, with the contrast of black and white and everything... awesome, written very well. :) 5/5, for sure!