Comments : A mask 4 u and a mask 4 me

  • 11 years ago

    by CoLliN

    Your poem is straight up and to the point, something most poets are striving for, your not as rough around the edges as you think.....find your flow which i think you already did but you haven't realized it yet.

  • 11 years ago

    by Mara

    Damn this is tight im adding to faves

  • 11 years ago

    by Shawn Robertson

    If you're truly just starting out, then I would say you have a knack for poems. I thought this one flowed well and was all around good, so keep up the good work :D.