And I wear your jacket all the time
^ I think this would sound better without the "I" but that's just my opinion.

Awhh, thats so sweet hunnyy. I love how much emotion was in such a few simple wordss. We could feel your love and your sadness that he was gonee. I love the descriptions and imagery throughout. Lovely jobb. 5/5

Omg Excellent!!!
i loved it!!
5/5
-Liz

Wow...
I really liked it..
Good Job