My Window

by The Sky is Falling   May 30, 2007


I look out my window
I see the green grass
I look even further
Watch all the cars pass.

I want to go running
I want to just see
Just stand watching children
As they run merrily

Maybe sit on a shore
And just watch the tide
Happy to greet people
Not turn my face and hide

As I gaze out my window
I remember the choices
That got me this cell

I want to change choices
Change things that Ive done
Realizing now
That they dont lead to fun.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nearly but not quite

    That's really sad! But beautifully written, keep it up, and thanks for your comment on my poem, and by the way, I love your hair, it's so cool!
    Helen

  • 16 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    The feeling were powerful and the wording choice made it better
    But there is some bugs here

    Change things that I�ve done
    Realizing now
    That they don�t lead to fun.

    If you correct those..It would be great
    Keep it up,
    Laura