Comments : Schools Out...Forever

  • 8 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    A very well written piece =]
    The poem was descriptive and the flow was consistant. The stanzas all held the rhyming scheme very well and I really enjoyed reading this poem. Awesome work 5/5

  • 7 years ago

    by AGirlWorthFightingFor

    Excellent word use and conveyance of emotions, but don't worry, sooner than you think school will be out forever and maybe then you'll be able look back and see how minor those problems then were