Nice poem there. especially liked best the first 2 paragraphs. and also liked the recurring it's gonna take some time... i know the feeling. some ppl are within our hearts for a long time or forever no matter what happened... 4/5

I feel ya! Good Poem!

Jeannie
Excellent piece. The pain and lonleiness can be felt in everyword you penned.

It's going to take a little more time
Your touch I still recall
A gentle kiss
From your sweet lips
Now nothing is there at all.

This stanz I can relate to. Even though our loses are diffrent we still share so many of the same feelings.
Love Cindy