Comments : A Little More Time

  • 11 years ago

    by reborn

    Nice poem there. especially liked best the first 2 paragraphs. and also liked the recurring it's gonna take some time... i know the feeling. some ppl are within our hearts for a long time or forever no matter what happened... 4/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Genna

    I feel ya! Good Poem!

  • 11 years ago

    by Cindy

    Excellent piece. The pain and lonleiness can be felt in everyword you penned.

    It's going to take a little more time
    Your touch I still recall
    A gentle kiss
    From your sweet lips
    Now nothing is there at all.

    This stanz I can relate to. Even though our loses are diffrent we still share so many of the same feelings.
    Love Cindy