Awww so sweet 5/5

Aww this is such a sweet poem. It's short, yet really shows how you feel about this person. It makes it a really personal poem also, by saying Princess. It's always sweet to be called something like that. A lovely poem. =]

Tammie

This was an awesome poem. i loved it david it was great and really shows how you feel about this person. i like it.

Very sweet! I'm glad I read this...I'm in that type of lovey dovey mood. Lol. I really liked this though. Beautiful. 5/5

` Liz =]

David,
this is a very beautiful poem
i loved it so much
i think it's sweet the way you say princess
I love that name
love always kaila
5/5

This is a beautiful poem David. Absolutely beautifully written. 5/5

Kalee

David
What a sweet piece you have written. Hope you share it with your frind.

Dear princess
Can't you see?
I need you close
Just you and me...

Love these lines.
Take Care Cindy

Thats really beautiful and heart warming poem.

Dear David,

It is hard to believe you are only 17!
You have the insights of an adult man!
Very nice work, son, all of it!
Keep on writing, I'll keep in reading!

Broker

Hey, that was beautiful..i have a "cyber friend" who lives half-way around the world, we met when he was here in school for awhile, but we talk over the internet and he calls me princess, so when i read this i almost cried. great writing..

carry :)

This was rather delightful to read. Gunuine sentiments were indeed apparent throughout the piece.

Simply beautiful and sweet, nonetheless. I hope you all the best and take care!

Debbie

Aw~! Adorable! 5/5

I think that this is actually one of my most favorite poems, ever, It is so amazing, You are amazing at poetry, keep it up:d

Like I have been sayin...you are good with different types of writting. And you are good enough writter to put things like older times like that into a poem. Im not sure I could. But it was well put together. And I love how he thinks of her so much. Cutee.