Comments : I am sorry for the mask

  • 11 years ago

    by Gypsy

    The rhyme and flow was mostly really good, apart from a couple of the last verses felt a bit forced, and there were a few spelling errors, but aside from that it was a brilliant poem on a good subject =]

  • 11 years ago

    by carrie

    ((i know the feeling, take care...))

    emo love,

  • 11 years ago

    by December

    I liked it.

    If its a true situation..
    Just be yourself allways..

    '' you laugh at me 'cause i'm different.. i laugh at you 'cause you're all the same ''


  • 11 years ago

    by Ecupidmo

    Man,if this is based on a true situation,you totally almost made me cry..
    don't worry,i totally understand what you mean..
    other than that,
    your rhythm was great except at some of the verses that didn't really rhyme..
    But hey, who cares??,your poem was GREATLY WRITTEN!!
    plus it was meaningful!
    keep it up!

    -emo cupid,thats me!

  • 11 years ago

    by Mey

    Awww thx you guys I love your comments ad yes it is a real situation