Comments : You're The One

  • 11 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Another greatly written emotional poem by my favorite poet. dear, you have done a great job with this....
    keep up the great work like always.

  • 11 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    This is such an excellent poem filled with love and desire, the word choice is great and the flow as well. I know the pain of letting go of the one you love, it's hard but sometimes it's for the best. You'll be a stronnger person for it in the future. amazing write 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    So beautifully written. I loved the flow and the love that you put into this poem. there was a grammer error though it was in your secong stanza and it was in the first line. Scared should be changed to shared. Other then that it was great! 5/5

    <UnToLd TrUtH>

  • 11 years ago

    by Startle Me

    Your first stanza?
    It could be a good quote.
    It's... almost a fact.

    But no matter what happens, your love was always the best
    Love that line.

    Third stanza's kind of cheesy.

    You still are the one that loves me [[though]] it all
    Do you mean "through"?

    And you're the one who will never let me die.
    A bit over dramatic.

    All in all.
    Pretty good.
    Not the best I've read.
    But it's okay.

  • 11 years ago

    by Delie

    You're my hero who catches me before I fall.

    like one of my fave lines. :)
    c'est tres good, and i really like how you show that your love is so strong and that he loves you back.
    well done.
    i gave it a 5/5, for all the &hearts; :)