Another greatly written emotional poem by my favorite poet. dear, you have done a great job with this....
keep up the great work like always.

This is such an excellent poem filled with love and desire, the word choice is great and the flow as well. I know the pain of letting go of the one you love, it's hard but sometimes it's for the best. You'll be a stronnger person for it in the future. amazing write 5/5

So beautifully written. I loved the flow and the love that you put into this poem. there was a grammer error though it was in your secong stanza and it was in the first line. Scared should be changed to shared. Other then that it was great! 5/5

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Your first stanza?
It could be a good quote.
It's... almost a fact.
Lol.

But no matter what happens, your love was always the best
Love that line.

Third stanza's kind of cheesy.

You still are the one that loves me [[though]] it all
Do you mean "through"?

And you're the one who will never let me die.
A bit over dramatic.

All in all.
Pretty good.
Not the best I've read.
But it's okay.
5/5?

You're my hero who catches me before I fall.

like one of my fave lines. :)
yeee.
c'est tres good, and i really like how you show that your love is so strong and that he loves you back.
well done.
i gave it a 5/5, for all the &hearts; :)