Another fantastic piece, I understand your feelings in the poem like they were my own, we often wish we could just start new and forget the past but the past never seems to fade. Amazing job and great imagery and flow once again, I'm adding you and this poem to my fav's. Your an excellent writer and your poems are real. 5/5
This was rather delightful to read. I love the metaphors you applied which conjour ~stark~ images on the whole piece. The flow was rather craggy at the beginning portion, whereas its overall impact wasn't affected negatively at all. It was, in fact, nicely done and well-presented throughout. ~Debbie
I loved it, it was truely brilliant.
It flowed really well and the imagery was very original.
I especially liked the similarities of the 1st stanzas and the last stanzas and the finality of the last lines x
Hey we have the same name, i've never met anyone like that before, loved the poem. you name your poems the PERFECT names, you have a real nack for it i wish i could think up names half as good as that, love your poems, so i was wondering if you could give me some feedback on some of mine, it would be greatly appreciated