Well done, excellent love poem. it was affectionate and moving. yet this is not the usual kind of love, this is more faith and trust. trust in god is wat first came to mind

5/5 david

Kira
Lovely poem.

A breath of hope, blows the cold away
O, faith, O eternal lasting clay
We remorsed to soon, I see a beat
Weak but strong, bitter but sweet

This stanza was really beautiful :)
Take care Cindy

Again its a beautifull poem as i have come to expect from a talented artist as you :) 5/5

ps the spell check did somthing strange to your poem "It�s " it does it to me sometimes :(