Comments : O, to thou

  • 11 years ago

    by David

    Well done, excellent love poem. it was affectionate and moving. yet this is not the usual kind of love, this is more faith and trust. trust in god is wat first came to mind

    5/5 david

  • 11 years ago

    by Cindy

    Kira
    Lovely poem.

    A breath of hope, blows the cold away
    O, faith, O eternal lasting clay
    We remorsed to soon, I see a beat
    Weak but strong, bitter but sweet

    This stanza was really beautiful :)
    Take care Cindy

  • 11 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Again its a beautifull poem as i have come to expect from a talented artist as you :) 5/5

    ps the spell check did somthing strange to your poem "It�s " it does it to me sometimes :(