Comments : Laying Here

  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Oh my goodness Bill......I AM TRYING SO HARD not to do anything sexual with my boyfriend because I want to stand firm on my faith and let God know I'm waiting till marriage...but if I keep reading your poems...oh my gosh...what will I do Bill? haha....
    Your poems are soooo amazing and I've told you that time and time again so why say it more right?...but they are just breathtaking and romantic....If you were my husband all you're writings would be framed on a wall somewhere!
    Excellent
    Chelsey

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Wow Bill !
    What a beautiful passionate write. The love you have for your wife shines in this poem. Excellent!
    Take Care your friend cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Lovely penned yet beautiful expressive emotions....simply yet perfect written! there are nothing to say, all is said...awesome!