A simple and refreshing poem you have here David. =] I enjoyed this. I think you should have a go at a sort of styled/formatted poem. I'd love to see how you would go at that, I think you'd do well.
Anyway, I liked this a lot. =] 5/5

Tammie

Short but very beautifully done ,and as I read it it made me remember the days my brothers and I used to go down to the river where we once lived ,what happy memories.Great write ,well done.

Short and simple. perfect. it reminds me of all the times when i go down to the beach. all of your thoughts and fears go out with every wave. 5/5

Kalee

Calming poem ^^ 5/5 I enjoyed reading it

David,
This poem is written with such simplicity
I loved it!!
It reminded me of when I was just camping and there was a creek
It just seems like all your thoughts just roll right away
what a wonderful job
5/5
love always kaila

Wow calm and simple 5/5 a cute poem xD

David
You are really coming up with some good stuff. Good imagery.
Take Care Cindy

I love nature poems and although short, I really did like this one. It was calming which was good kind of reminded me of those tapes that are used to calm a person or put them to sleep. :] lol.

5.5

It's a nice nature poem. Calm and definitely refreshing. Something different. Simple write and nicely done. Nice the way it is.
~Faith-less

Kwl poem

Pretty decent ;)
its a calming poem for sure
good job once again
<3ang

I really loved the start and all of it really just the ending.
right off behind.....why those words? I think there needs to be a bit more effect to these last 3 words, i would replace them or add something on the end like, nothing to worry about, for worrying doesnt exsist anymore or like just re peating the word or phrase.....and u could connect it to another verse that would make it even more interesting and affective...just trying to give some useful suggestions...
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