Comments : Congratulations

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    "Every day they make me proud
    of who they have become
    apart of my is so happy
    but a part of me is numb."

    That stanza struck me because it is how i'm feeling right now.

    "Good luck to all the friends I made
    through this very long year
    I hope you know I am proud of you
    even though I shed tears. "

    But the last stanza made me smile because you made me see, that goodbyes aren't forever unless you make them that way
    Excellent poem =)
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 16 years ago

    by hani

    Hi
    very nice and beautiful good work keep it up 5/5 .
    and i'll appreciate your vote and comment for my poems
    hani