Comments : Waiting

  • 11 years ago

    by Teria

    Wow. It made me want to cry.
    I know how this feels.. and the ending. WOW.
    Amazing amazing, eh.
    I didn't expect it.
    Great emotion and perfect flow.
    I loved the poeeem. :]

  • 11 years ago

    by lynn

    Just know how you feel

    sad and love are nearly the same thing-maybe you wont get me but this is how i understand love

  • 11 years ago

    by Christina

    Great poem.
    So many feelings.
    It is sure going to my favourite list.
    The end is just perfect.

    (and yea i forgot the of thing,thanks a lot ^^)

  • 9 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    Wow, I don't know what to say...I am speechless.....that was perfect. I read in your profile that we should not expect anything great but this was masterpiece. It was truely flawless. I really enjoyed it and I loved the rhyming. It flowed so beautifully. I did not expect the twist that you added of him not being worthwhile to wait on. That was very clever. I really loved the ending. This poem is definately going to be added to my faves. Great Job 5/5