Comments : 5 - in - 1 Sofa Bed

  • 11 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Lovely yet funny poems you penned here, simply yet awesome written....WELL EXPRESSIVE!

  • 11 years ago

    by Lu

    Jeannie you have such a wonderful way with words. You can write about ANYTHING thrown your way.
    I love this poem !

    I'm not one to shudder or make a complaint
    But five in a bed is too many for me
    I grabbed my pillow and headed upstairs
    In one of their beds was the best place to be.
    ^^^^

    The imagery was certainly getting crowded ... lol

    Well done Auntie a wonderful read.

  • 11 years ago

    by Dixiedaisy

    Jeannie,

    You know I absolutely loved this delightful read. I told you the story of what it made me think of. Thank you for entertaining me and in the process writing such a unique little story. Hmmmm...... 5 n 1 beds. Now there is a real super size deal.

    Great Job,
    Kay

  • 11 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Haha. That was really funny and cute. One of the few poems that actually made me laugh. Great write! Keep it up!

    ~Morgan~

  • 11 years ago

    by lisa

    HAHAHHA great job loved it.i know that feeling to when im with my niece x

  • 11 years ago

    by Wallace

    Lol, very interesting. It was nicely written and it kept my attention all the way, I really enjoyed it, keep it up.

  • 11 years ago

    by skye16

    Interesante... i enjoyed this as well

  • 11 years ago

    by KIMMY

    Very cute!!