Comments : People Think

  • 11 years ago

    by Israfel

    Great poem. It's a feeling that I'm sure many can relate with. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by geeeeee

    "My life slowly falls apart
    But no one will ever know
    What I feel deep inside
    That I have so much sorrow"

    As soon as I started reading this, I felt like the words had been ripped out from a page of my life book. I can really relate to this one. I hide alot of pain inside. The sad thing is people think they know you, but really they dont know the first thing about you. This was a really great poem!

    Take Care:)

  • 10 years ago

    by 888Trinity888

    Hey, thanks for the comment!! this is really good and fits together really well