Powerful and painful 5/5 beautifully written

~NinjaGirl~

Those are awesome lyrics...I want to hear music with them now....It was so beautiful. I loved the word choice. "A melted ice beneath the sun." that was my favorite line...very image striking. I also loved the chorus...it was wonderful. Great Write!

~Morgan~

Very well penned song, sad and intense.Enjoyed reading it.