Comments : What is it

  • 16 years ago

    by bacha

    I loved it:):)

    for sure its agreat one:):)

    keep it up:)

    khuloodan:)
    smile all the time:)

  • 16 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    Wow this poem was very touching 5/5 i liked this paragraph especially:

    "But we not perfect we never stop judging
    discriminating
    hating
    criticizing
    hurting the people we care about most"

    so true that we're not perfect... anyways, deeply moving piece of poetry keep writing!

    ~NinjaGirl~